Rebirth- A Poem

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By Cheri Bermudez

Put the pen to the paper and the words eloquently flow

Like a serene woodland stream

Put the gun to my head and just let go, leave this life and all the pain I know

My blood and the water run as one, flowing sweetly, glints of red in the setting sun

As the blood leaves my body so does the pain, washing away like a summer's rain

Again I become one with the Earth, from my death a new birth

I rise like a phoenix from the ash, proud and tall and unabashed

With new feathers, with new form, with new life, unadorned

By the demons that haunt my past and the fears I once had

A new story begins, the ending unclear, with faith in my heart and no more tears

Do not mourn my timely death for a new life is all that's left

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Ruchira profile image

Ruchira Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Beautiful expression of death and rebirth.

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Canscorpion Level 3 Commenter 6 months ago

Wow... how beautifully you presented one's wish for a new life. I just loved the flow and the way you referred your feelings. Voted up!

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anupma 6 months ago

Awesome. . . Yes life after death will be more beautiful, we think so, and the truth only God knows. But youur philosophical poem is great.

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WannaB Writer Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

I hope that is indeed how it happens for those who leave this life to avoid pain. Very eloquently written.

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