Missing Pieces- A Poem

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By Cheri Bermudez

Soak in these words

Can't believe that they're mine

So little progress

In such a long time

I started to tear

and rip them apart

Tried to give myself

A fresh, brand new start

But these words and this pain

have defined my life

And can not be let go

Without struggle and strife

So I pick up the ripped pieces

that define me so well

And try to place them together

With some semblance of self

Destroyed they may be

They still represent me

So I'll keep trying

To set my soul free

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jrsearam 13 months ago

Lovely poem Cheri but it makes me a little sad. Many blessings, JR

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gis_r07 13 months ago

What a soulful poem! I appreciate you sharing it with us, although it did leave me with a teardrop or two. I voted up and beautiful.

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Cheri Bermudez Hub Author 13 months ago

Thank you both for the feedback. This is one of the first times I've shared a poem publicly, just because there is so much emotion that goes into writing one. I'm glad that you both found it to be lovely albeit sad. =)

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Eiddwen 13 months ago

Great words put together beautifully.

I now look forward to reading much more of your work.

Take care

Eiddwen.

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Cheri Bermudez Hub Author 13 months ago

Thank you for your kind words :)

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writinginalaska Level 1 Commenter 13 months ago

good job Cheri, this reminds me so much of some of my poetry. GMTA!! I think i will follow you. :)

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Cheri Bermudez Hub Author 13 months ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm following you as well =)

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Sun-Girl Level 2 Commenter 11 months ago

Lovely and a heart feeling poem, thanks for sharing.

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